this was a whole different picture actually...it's harshly cropped, auto-levels+color gave the cold tone+eyes took a few layers+frame+text. that's all.
when giving title i asked to myself what is she looking at...and it felt as if she said "tonight, i will...(add a proper ending here)" *hollow laugh*
The color and the makeup are very effective. I love the choice of font for the title too. Not sure if your Courier name text fits this style though. Watch for "noise" that appears in neutral-color areas when you manip the saturation. It appears as green/red dots or splotches in areas that are supposed to be grey. Other than that, I really enjoy the photo.
i like the composition, and those eyes look great.
i feel like its a bit too detailed though. as in, the tiny inflections in color, the 'glitter' so to speak, is distracting to me. i wish those colors could be a bit smoother - you can see it in her fleshtones too...
don't get me wrong, i love the shot, i just think it might have a bit too much noise in the face, maybe try smoothing the color out somehow, softening it.
Not a fav of your work, but creative and awesome as always. I am a writer, so I love the title and the description of the title. I totally see it.
"Tonight, I will....
treat my boyfriend like a prince, smoke some greenage, and cause a ruckus!!"
Later, tif
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i feel like its a bit too detailed though. as in, the tiny inflections in color, the 'glitter' so to speak, is distracting to me. i wish those colors could be a bit smoother - you can see it in her fleshtones too...
don't get me wrong, i love the shot, i just think it might have a bit too much noise in the face, maybe try smoothing the color out somehow, softening it.
love those eyes though, damn...
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treat my boyfriend like a prince, smoke some greenage, and cause a ruckus!!"
Later, tif
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